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Candle wax

Your hand melts inside mine
and sticks to my skin like candle wax,
a brunt out light that frees its soul
through thin lines of grey smoke.
Its warmth is still in the air
in this wintry darkness,
alight layer of still air
expanding over my body as I breathe out.  

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Angel

Nicely written angel

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Tony Taylor

Wow GIULIA!!......the imagery in this piece is STELLAR.... and conjures up the romanticism implied beautifully......I love that you delivered iii n such a succinct formatting..... makes it that much more powerful!!......a fine piece of Candle Wax indeed! (smiles).....ALL STARS!!.... well penned dear poet sister..... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo.  : )

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Giulia Ulivucci

Oh my, thank you! I am definitely overwhelmed (in the best way possible), it is the first time I publish something I write...

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