Poem -
can't be R'sd
obsessive compuslive disorder
is the result of an obsessive
compulsive mind
it's the order of the day
in itself it can not be a disorder
as being in order is the order
to be followed obsessively compulsively
and not in any disarray
it's obsessive as it can not be
minimalistic yet minimalistic
must also be obsessive..in a big small way
Maybe I have Obsesive non Compulsive Disorder
the result of an UNTIDY MIND
a mind that will not be organised
it is random..it is free thinking
it has not been institutionialised
by tv, by the media, by politics
by alcohol ..drugs..fluoride
nano bots, poisonous personalities
long live Obsessive non compulsive Disorder
anarchy...it's not manditory
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This is certainly COMPULSIVE reading...and the thoughts and images are nicely ORDERED too!!
Excellent!!!
J ;)
Nice comment Jason...my creative flame burns low..waiting for another passion burst...not enough time for work and play and sleep these days..nor reading...still strive forth...better things hopefully to come..
Thanks
It's a difficult thing to do, but the trick is to keep writing through those creative lulls. What comes out may not be very good, but you keep the muscle active nonetheless.
And for what it's worth, if this poem is an example of you at a low ebb...then it's still pretty damn good!! You may not be feeling it...but sometimes the creative subconscious (rather like muscle memory) takes over and gets on very well without our interfering.
Keep on keeping on, Pauline.
J ;)