Poem -

CAN'T WAIT TO SEE

The spring flowers in full bloom, can't wait to see,
the squirrels and rabbits scurrying about then there's Easter
and all the children getting easter candy it is the Lord's Holiday
he is risen Amen.

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Greg Etsell

Hello Linda I like your poem
I think that it couldn’t be better
if you would use capital letters
at the beginning of each sentence 
that would make it a a better poem
also if you lay out your poem a different 

If you do it this way

The spring flowers in full bloom
Can’t wait to see the squirrels
And the rabbit Scurrying about and
Then their easter and all the 
Children getting easter candy
It is the Lords holiday 
He has risen Amen.

Now this is a great poem
but I’m just trying to help

 

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