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carnival upon sundown .

We fell in love
On a warm summers night
At a carnival upon sundown
The light shinning upon my face
looking sad wearing my frown
In shyness looking down towards the ground
afraid to stand out in the crowd,
when i gazed up
There he was looking straight at me,
big beautiful blue eyes,
biggest smile upon his face
Just like falling from amazing grace,
he said to me,
How can someone so beautiful frown,
Look up , smile your to pretty to look down,
and in that moment my heart belonged to him
Devoted to his beautiful face,
his touch upon my skin,
Everything about him drew me in,
We made love that night ,
until the rising of the sun,
holding each other through the night,
beads of sweat dripping from our skin,
Time was frozen within delight ,
I loved him more than anything
He was my everything,
we smiled and laughed ,
our naked bodies danced,
the warmth in his eyes,
His souls glance,
i never wanted to leave him,
he was my love, and i his champ,
i remember his lips and how they tasted,
the way he spoke of me,
as a perfect princess,
a priceless piece of art,
he will forever and always be the key
That opened my heart.
Even in death we shall never be apart,

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you beautiful flower girl, so much more to this story, but I'll keep those memories to myself, because they are way to special and sacred, glad you liked this , it was one of the best nights of my younger years, love and hugs nardine xoxo

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Tony Taylor

Wow Nardine!!.........this is an amazingly compelling write..........I felt like I was there sharing a magical night in your life.........great imagery Big Sis!!...........thanx for sharing this .........beautifully conveyed loving moments.............big smiles...............T  xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Heya my brother tony, thanks heaps sweetie, magical night, i remember like yesterday,
glad you liked it, much love your sis nardine xoxo

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Georgina Richardson

I really loved this one sweety, it was just intoxicating to read. Well done, a lovely piece. Love G xx

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you mama bear ❤ was a hard one to let go of emotionally, but I'm glad it's here,
love you so much xoxo nardine

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