CATCHING RAINDROPS

When I am done
​I shall set down this weightÂ
Under an elm or an oak
Where the leaves might curl themselvesÂ
​​​​​​To catch raindrops
Or by the wild foxgloves in June
When I am done
I shall place the weight gently
​​​​​​Before the universe or god
Or the light
And say thankyou but I don't wish it back
For it is too full and sits heavilyÂ
Upon my shoulders
When I am done
I shall recall how it was once empty
With a promise and a hope
Allowed me to grow strong Â
To travel far
How it has filled and spilled
Many times
More times than I can count
Filled and spilled with love
And loves memoryÂ
With childrenÂ
And children's children
With friends and happiness
Song and sunlightÂ
Laughter and knowledge
And scented things
Filled and spilled also
With nameless things
Untill my breath is laboured
With all things unseen
And my heart is slowedÂ
With all the things
Known
And my footstep is heavyÂ
Burdened with disappointments
And loss
Sorrow and tears
So many tears
So when I am done
I shall set down this weight
Under an elm or an oak
Where the leaves might curl themselves
To catch raindrops
Or by the wild foxgloves in June
And say thankyou
But I don't wish it back
I am done.
Marion Price(2019)
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Wow!Â
Favorite part:Â
So when I am done
I shall set down this weight
Under an elm or an oak
Where the leaves might curl themselves
To catch raindrops
Or by the wild foxgloves in June
Extremely descriptive. Loved the images of the foxgloves.Â
I also liked how you repeated the line, "When I am done"Â
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Sorry for the very late reply Karina...thankyou so much for your feedback and comments, appreciated ?
Awww beautiful luv but where have you hone to, Matthew keeps asking me where’s my
lovely Marionette & sadly I don’t know :( ???
Hi love, sorry Jill for late reply. My kids come home for Christmas so it's always really busy and not been able to come on here. Back to normal now so will catch up on yours and everybody's this week hopefully ...thanks love ?
This is one of your most beautiful pieces. I love it
So sorry for late reply Greg, Christmas( say no more!) Thankyou so much for that, glad you liked ?
Awww Hi luv long as ok xxx