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Cause of Love: Death

Cause of Love: Death

Nails painted crimson red
Stained with my screaming blood
Lips soft and full
Kissing me to slumbers of sorrow
Eyes flaming with sunset fire
A gaze that summoned snow in my soul

Enamoured by her shadow
She threw me in the dungeon of despair
Drowning in the sea of betrayal
Where I stare to the sky forever

At the bottom of the sea
My eyes will never close
As I would see her true deathly form
For she was not Eve
But the Serpent in the tree
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zZzleepy

Oh my, it was giving me very much biblical vibes girl, then I got to the end and damn. I felt this one in my burning soul. I was seeing the colour red and the colour black then red again. Such a sorrowful and sorrow-full story Agnes. Very manaia!! β€πŸ–€Β 
πŸ’œ HeidiΒ 

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agnes

I knew my pk would get where i was going haha and yes i tried my best to depict tragic love! believe it or not, i was inspired by a guy who has been venting to me his heartbreak and anger towards a girl he loved and first thing i thought... was she was not eve but the serpent in the tree lol

Thanks girl, always appreciate your comments!

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