Poem -
Centipede
Like 2 Pin it 0I often have a rare flower in mind...
Honey bees feed
Flowers cross pollinate
Germinate and breed...Yet all I get is the stench...
The wasps polluting a picnic...
A sugar soaked sticky bench
Swatted away
The hot tempered drinking...
Binging all day
A bad example I lead
A lemur in the jungle
Chewing on a toxic centipede
Exhausted and bored
I fall to the cool forest floor
Mother nature will take meSurrendered....
A defenceless baby
Mother nature
Will reincarnate me
Make me suffer
Once more
I am a slave to the truffle....
Mother nature's wild boar
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Wow SYD!!....this is friggin' great man!!....I mean, I could see the decaying creature as it gave in to its inevitable fate ~
~ " Exhausted and bored
I fall to the cool forest floor
Mother Nature will take me..."
The imagery and phrasing in this write is SUPERB dear poet brother!!..... wow!!....
Had to PIN this my friend!!...... it's beautifully done!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo
Thank you so much Tony for your continued time and feedback (also patience lol)
I'm glad you enjoyed this write. It's one I wrote while intoxicated... as you know.
Take care my friend. Always a pleasure to read your poems and receive your feedback.
- Syd
Great imagery and thought provoking.
read your write several times
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem John. I always appreciate your feedback. I'll head over to your page for a read now.
Cheers - Syd
That moment during a toxic binge, just before you sleep, when time stops and we see beyond the veil, when daylight starts to creep and we just can't seem to accept life, we create such odd images that startle the mind, it's the best time, for me anyway. What a great piece Syd.
What a great comment Gerard, you've pretty much hit the nail on the head. Your comment alone would make a great poem.
Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. Much appreciated.
- Syd