Poem -

Chalkboard

If I wrote down everything you promised me
The board would be filled.
The chalk staining my left hand
As I viscously write down the lives you've made up for us
But like clockwork you let me finish
Filling the entire board with our stories
Then erasing my work without a second thought.
For a while I quietly watched you
Picking back up the chalk
And rewriting our stories like you promised
But this time when I finished and read it outloud
It didn't sound the same.
These stories were always fairy talesย 
And you were the villain the entire time.
So like a knight I saved myself
And before you got the chance
I erased the chalkboard.ย 

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Pratibha Savani

Ooohhh I like the chalkboard metaphor for describing a relationship especially the erasing part to show what's really going on!! Very intriguing. Brilliant write xxx

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Yumekopl

Wow. Thank you so much. This was my first time publishing my work so I really appreciate your comments!

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Pratibha Savani

Welcome to cosmo!! Well done for your first piece. I only joined last month so know how it feels xxx

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