Poem -
Choosing Your Path
When everything is taken into consideration,
It is better to view all in objective moderation.
Never to become extreme in attitude or views,
It is the straight pathΒ everyone should choose !
Never rush to join a fight,Β
Find your way to the light.
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Awesome Richard, you are most talented!
HUG ! Β x
You areΒ talented too !!!Β Love your poetry.
Wishing you all the best as always.
Take care. Β :)
Hello Richard...
Great message my friend...
I have been watching the war going on...
No one will cease fire not even temporarily to help the wounded...
So many children being new victims to being an orphan and being dead...
The world is going more crazy...
It's said it gets worst before it gets better...
We have to look at the big picture...
God Bless!
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
It is terrible to see the devastation caused by warfare but all wars do come to an end !
It is sad that men feel they have to fight each other.
Look to the future with optimism.
HUG ! Β x
Hey SIR WATERS!!...... you're awesome!!...... powerful advice....... delivered in perfect, poetic, metering!!.......LOVE this!!....... miss you around here brother poet!!.......ALL STARS!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS !!......T xo.Β ?
Thank you for such kind words !
Warmest wishes to you !
Take care. Β :)
Hello :) This is so beautiful. I often struggle with this, in my way. Fighting my own spontaneous sarcasm to keep focus on the end of the tunnel, or road. Hitting a rest stop can be a relief or a distraction... and it is easy to fall away from the path. That is my personal vibe on your beautiful ink. Pleasure to read Richard. Blessings, Rebecca
So pleased you could relate to this piece so readily ! It is gratifying to know that a work of mine has had such an impact.
Wishing you well in whatever you do ! Β :)
Blessings.
Enjoyable and clear message, I write similar themed poems check them out if you get a chance.
Will have to take a look at the works you submit to Cosmo. I was most impressed with your initial entriesΒ !
Take care my friend. Β :)