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Chronic

undiagnosed

Fatigue hits me in strange ways
 
I can't predict its hours or days
 
It's debilitating
 
It's humiliating
 
It's an uncontrollable malaise
 
 
With no clear perousia
 
bosses think I must be kidding
 
As it's impossible to provide a diagnostic
 
even I'm an agnostic
 
and wonder if I'm fibbing
 
 
But put me on the road like this
 
and I can guarantee
 
microsleep with override
 
I'm sure to kill somebody
 
and see them on the other side
 
 
No one will believe me
 
until it's gone all flopsy
 
and whatever with my brain is wrong
 
will show in the autopsy
 

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Marion

Can relate!! Nice write ?

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Tony Taylor

Hey AL!!...... Compelling write indeed.....I actually have a friend who suffers from this malady...... and it IS diagnosable..... It's called CFS.....or...."Chronic Fatigue Syndrome" and it can be treated......I hope this is not YOU that suffers from this because it can be something takes a VERY long time to overcome!!.....WELL penned and certainly deserves more of the spotlight to shined upon it!!.........ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo. : )

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