Poem -
In Circles I Dance
I don't play with the big dogs
Yeah, their playground
Just isn't my size
So I guess its no surprise
That I don't play the games
They play
I'm no threat to them
Don't even warrant a glanceΒ
I prance in my small little circle
In circles I dance
"How is he so happy go lucky
When we stretch like skyscrapers
Could touch the sky
Without even trying
And his feet are tied
This man must be blind"
Well in time
Ive consorted with lions
Supplying the means for me to grow
And those bonds that existed
Are turning to gold
And when I sell them
I still wont play with
The big dogs
My playground will be too big
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Hello CO...
Hey Curious...
Listen...
I was thinking that since you are little and...
I am little...
May I Come and Play...
With You?
Your playground sounds like a...
BLAST!
I just know that we could have so much fun...
PLEASE MAY I COME IN AND PLAY TOO?
Hugs...
By the way...
My name is sparrowsong
Of course stay for as long as you want, your name is wonderful :)
CO
This seems pretty deep. At least that is my take on this!! Love love love your writing!!
Love,
Val β₯οΈ
Thanks Val, your comments keep me going, really thank you, I have the greatest idea for a new co-write so we'll work together soon
Love and respect,
CO
Hello Curious...
That is very nice of you...
Thank You Very Much!
I am not ready yet...
I will get back in touch...
Where is the dance circle/playground?
THANKS AGAIN SO MUCH!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Everywhere you can see, take care
Are you thanking me for thanking you?
Love and respect
CO
Hello Curious...
I am...
Thanking you for Thanking me and...
For letting stay and play as long as I want and...
For being such a Great Friend and!
For your sweetness and...
I know you would allow me to go on forever, but...
I gotta fly...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hey ONLOOKER!!........starting to understand why you chose that name........you ARE truly curious........I have some very cool book suggestions for you..........you're saying what Thomas Kempis said in the 1400's...........sure .......it's fine to explore every possibility a human has deep in it's inner nature........but when those explorations..........Metaphysical or scientific in nature.........take you to the place where power and greed come into play.........then .........the jeopardy of your souls destiny becomes threatened.......many great thinkers have wrestled with these philosophical dilemma's...........the fact that you're touching on them.........says a lot about how evolved your soul is...........Love your stuff bro..........especially the places it's taking you...........well done (again)...........later tater............T xo
Well share as many as you can I'd love to check them out, and it seems as though we are in agreement that the soul becomes vulnerable when those unsightly qualities come into play, thanking you for your generous compliments is just redundant but thank you anyways, we'll talk soon my friend
CO
Well share as many as you can I'd love to check them out, and it seems as though we are in agreement that the soul becomes vulnerable when those unsightly qualities come into play, thanking you for your generous compliments is just redundant but thank you anyways, we'll talk soon my friend
CO
I looked at your keywords read the poem
and find the metaphors most curious
so you are now renamed "most curious"
I agree this is meaningful and I feel I am
the "curious onlooker" so for me this is a
poignant piece. Luv from Jai :)