Poem -
Clear Vision
This world used to be so hard to understand,
With so much of it lacking fundamental logic !
Your soul removed everything grey and bland,
Allowing me instantly to observe pure magic !
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A knowledgeable touch was an utter surprise,
Showing this cold heart what it did not grasp !
Living became far more than I ever did realise,
With you clearing mist badly skewing my past.
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Now, each day is one I promise to be part of,
With your presence raising me to new heights !
There is nothing greater than our sacred love,
Which has given vision revealing valued sights.Ā
Ā
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Beautiful SIR WATERS!!..... just her presence (her soul)..... lifted the veil of understanding for you..... wow!..... that idea alone is amazingly powerful...... but you've have taken it into the poetic magic that only a deep love and appreciation of another's soul can convey!!......ALL STARS!!..... just awesome poetry my friend!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?ā³ā“āā„
Thank you for your kind remarks on my poetry !
Your opinion on my work is always welcome and much appreciated as I do value highly how you assess the writings merit !
Your support and encouragement has been invaluable on my journey through forming and understanding this medium.
Wishing you the very best my friend.
Take care. Ā :)
Hi Richard, Ā I love the metaphor of the mirror ## a reflection of reality, Ā of truth, Ā of everything that's happening in the world, and of love ###Ā
great write ###
hugs, Ā peace and cheersĀ
LeahĀ
:) Love changes everything and helps you see and appreciate the world around you differently !
Thank you for giving my poetry such support, which is always most valued !
Warmest wishes to you.
Hugs.
xx
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My Dear Friend Richard,
I looked into the sky and saw, His everlasting light
He reached down to me and touched my soul, I raised to unknown heights
Now we share our love in purity, I've been cleansed of my naive past
I know now that my Creator cares, and our love will ever last
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
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Your words are so eloquently moving. You have a way with words to be envious of ! :)
Thank you for your contributions to my pieces.....such additions mean everything !
Thank you for being there my friend. It is comforting to read your caring approaches and philosophies. Wishing you the very best...always ! Take care.
:)
Now you've gone and made me cry, with these beautiful words you have bestowed upon me. Ā It is I that should be sending them to you, for the inspirations that you bring to me. Ā I feel that we have touched each others souls.
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
Hug. Peace and love to you.
Take care my friend. :)