Poem -
CLOUD
I`m sensing a tragic black cloud
That is enveloping you.
And I`m getting more and more worried
Each darkening day!
How can I lift it from you my darling?
Oh Lord are you hearing me pray?
Lost it seems is that beautiful smile!
Your gentle eyes no longer twinkle or brightly shine!
Oh my sweet darling
Where did your laughter go?
I haven`t heard it for such a long while!
Your sadness is consuming you
Your painful silence so very long!
Where did that sunny demeanor go?
Please my darling!
Please tell me what`s wrong?!!
G xx
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Hi G such a sad poem, i hope the dark
cloud can lift for just a little while
A beautifully written poem
love and hugs Debs xx
Hi Debs, thank you sweetie, I`m glad you liked it. We`ve all been like that I`ll bet!
God bless
G xx
Hi G Yes I have been there many times too
At least we can write down how we feel which helps
a little
big hugs to you Debs xx
Hi Debs,
Writing is a self help therapy for me, although I didn`t start writing or even know I could do it till 2013! It helps me cope with Andrew`s death, in fact it`s the only thing that keeps me going. My youngest son Christopher bought me this laptop for my birthday in 2013 and patiently taught me how to use it as I had never used a computer before that. I like to read poetry and he found this site for me and then challenged me to try to write something and it`s gone from there. You are quite right it helps to write your feelings down and it helps to get your thoughts in perspective. I`m glad you liked this one sweetie.
God bless
G xx
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...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!!!...from the deep comes this sweet...from your know comes this understanding...thank your Son for his gift to the world...nj
Thank you N.J I`m glad you liked it honey.
Love G xx
Hi our dear Georgina,
No one on earth could cure their sadness more adeptly than you. I feel they will come to you soon, and, together, you will administer your great gift of love. Thus alleviating their deepest secret pain. You will be their panacea! God Bless You!
Love from us both,
L & L
Hi my Larry and my Linda,
I love you both so much, you are both `MY` panacea, and it`s the both of you that keeps me going each day. You were both wonderful to me yesterday and you both gave me the inspiration and energy to keep going, with your wonderful loving advice and your comforting affection and love in your private messages! You have both brought me so much comfort, love and joy and so much calmness in my soul. So much so that it helps me get up each morning. Now I look forward to facing each day.
I get excited when I receive your wonderful comments on my work and I look forward to them and appreciate each and every one of them. You are both my inspiration and my guides. It is the both of you that keeps me writing my feelings down on paper.
I want the people of this site to know that I love you both dearly and I`m very, very proud of you. I`m honoured that you are both my treasured friends. You are both wonderful loving, generous and caring people and my closest best friends and your work is amazing and beautiful. Your talent for the written word is superb Larry and I look forward to reading each one of your lovely poems and the help that your lovely Linda does for you is amazing too, you are both my beautiful soulmates and that makes me very, very proud indeed.
I love you both very much
G xx
Hi our dear Georgina,
How can one respond to such a beautiful letter? We can only say that we feel exactly the same about you! It is remarkable that we came to know each other on this poets corner and have made a dear friend for life! We are always here if you need us, as we know you are for us too. We love you, and we pray that some day, we'll all get to spend some time in person, and not by letter. Again, these are the most beautiful words that myself or Linda have ever received from someone! You honor us so.
Love from us both,
Linda and Larry
God bless
Love G xx