Poem -
Clutch of Feeble Pills
My simple poem in this life; won't amount to much,
Though I hope it will be a legacy of honor and such!
There is an angel in history that will always be known,
A humble Celestial servant that rolled back" The Stone!"
Most in this life will never seek; or ask his name,
Though, the next life; will be honored just the same.
A coming glorious event is what my view is on,
A host of family; for centuries have been gone!
In this life; I was noted for my physical skills,
Now swaying; I'm reduced to a clutch of feeble pills!
Those people that are coming with apostles and scribes,
Maybe as an angel; I'll swing back a door for the lost ten tribes!
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Comments
Jim you just keep giving us more and more of your sheer brilliance ❤️⭐️💙pinned that ouchy pin ⭐️
Wish you could convince my wife of that! lol!.........................lad
Thank you sparrowsong!
Hi Jim, one never expects anything less from you my friend and this piece is right up there! You have a wonderfully gifted way of bringing the reality of Afterlife right into our visionline..that's a great skill ! Thank you Lodigiana x
ps trying to award stars but it's just not playing ball..but know that it would always be TOP STARS for you ! *****
Thank you lodigiana for reading and your wonderful comment!.............Jim
Thank you Hj for taking time to read and support my sometimes feeble efforts!..................your friend Jim
Thanks Greg!
Jim...this is beautiful! I find it really heartfelt. You are an angel here on Earth though ...you don't need to move up there...you can't... we want you down here more! Stay well my friend x
You are so very kind! my brilliant friend!
That is a heaven a beautiful life after ...it is a a mystery an image in my mind and yet you brought me there with your amazing poetry . That is more than a poetic skill but a natural love a passion and heart felt ... brilliant .. what more can I say but sheer genius ! 😊
Hi Jim, I'm atheist myself but that doesn't take away the clever craftsmanship and message of this poem.
- Syd
thanks Syd!
Otherworldly Jim .. although Buddhist .. you make a guy want to believe :)
if the seed grows! you know it is a good one! thank you Nev.!
hey Nev! you went way back to my 7th page! that page has my best write ever! " Moon of Sorrow"!