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Cold old bones 💙

Cold old bones 💙

I shiver and quiver like rolling rapid rivers

Meandering down mountainsides, mustering might it delivers

When one is getting older the cold is a mould, that penetrates the pores like pure carat gold

Chilling the very bones on my worn out body, needing hot water bottles with a stiff hot toddy 

That rain is a pain when it sleets and snows, I will hibernate like a hedgehog until it melts and goes

I dread the wintertime when the frost turns to ice, stabbing my skeleton like a carpenters vice

Yet I frolic in fun with that old currant bun, soothing my senses amidst the sizzling sun…

 

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Gwendoline

Good Morning Jill 💗 this is my first read of the day, and a fab start!  wow so much imagery painted for the readers imagination. Utter delight my friend  😊 Now I need a cosy hot drink ☕️ xx 

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thanks Hunnybun 💕💕💕

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem 
as always 
GOOD MORNING!!!!!!

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Tony Taylor

Hello JILL!!.....I too believe I must now endeavor to pour a warm libation for myself....this is filled to the brim with stirring imagery dear poet sister.....Interestingly enough, only moments ago, I just posted a poem called "THESE BONES"....what's that they say? ~ 'great minds think alike?"...smiles....ALL STARS & PINNED!!....ever the pleasure!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

❤️💕❤️Thanks Tony 🌹

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Being Me

Wow, I really felt the cold while reading this little delight. Great work! Love it x

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Lorna

🥶🥶🥶🥶
its stating to get a bit chilly up here isnt it?? 

Really great poem, love the imagery 

Yet I frolic in fun with that old currant bun, soothing my senses amidst the sizzling sun…

Absolutely love this line 
Lorna x

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thanks Hunnybun 💕💕💕

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