Poem -

colour me waxy

silhouettes
weave unimportance
into the fray of a day
colour me waxy off white
with no edge
I am ever so here
being ever so dead 
to it all

who blurred the flowers 
that ride on the fence
they're staining the sky with
a real pretence
at it all

colour me waxy
off white with no edge
I am ever so here feeling
ever such dread
for it all

M ~

 

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Bernadete van d...

I think you are feeling sad, Marion.
You wrote a very sad poem. And if you are, i don’t know the reason, still, would like to be able to give you a hug. 
 

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Marion

I felt it my lovely. Thankyou for your kindness X

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Shirley Harrison

I get the very strong feeling that you feel invisible and that you don't care incredibly sad and powerful,  the imagery tells me that there is a translucent feeling and it's ok. Very very powerful dearest Marion, I can only say the way you write makes a huge impact on your reader and I can feel all the emotions. 🌹

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Marion

Wow...go you...so perceptive Shirley. Thankyou for your very kind comment lovely lady...hugs x

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