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Colours of Love

Colours of Love

Baby blue, I fell in love with you 
This is a love so pure and true 
  
Vivid red, you continue to run through my head 
My addiction longs to be fed 

Darkened green, no need to be mean 
He is simply the finest man, my eyes have ever seen 

Blinding yellow, all he needs is to say hello 
And my body feels like jello 

Calming white, I will continue to fight 
To make our future bright

Blinding black, there's no turning back 
You keep me on the track

Vibrant pink our hearts are at link 
Our hearts beat in sync

Soiled brown, our love feeds the desire of the town 
We are the miracle grow, fertilizing the seeds in the compact ground

Calming grey, I am on my way 
On bended knees I prey, for guidance through the bran new day

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Anthony Lane

 Each stanza on it's own is really nice, but when read all together, the meter is off. Though what you say is good. When reading it aloud is comes out a little awkward because the stanzas have different syllable counts. I enjoyed what you have here and it doesn't have to change at all if that is your desire. I just wanted to give some friendly advice(from my perspective). Don't stop expressing yourself because you have talent! Anthony

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