Colours of Love

Baby blue, I fell in love with you
This is a love so pure and true
Vivid red, you continue to run through my head
My addiction longs to be fed
Darkened green, no need to be mean
He is simply the finest man, my eyes have ever seen
Blinding yellow, all he needs is to say hello
And my body feels like jello
Calming white, I will continue to fight
To make our future bright
Blinding black, there's no turning back
You keep me on the track
Vibrant pink our hearts are at link
Our hearts beat in sync
Soiled brown, our love feeds the desire of the town
We are the miracle grow, fertilizing the seeds in the compact ground
Calming grey, I am on my way
On bended knees I prey, for guidance through the bran new day

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Comments
very nice congrats x
Each stanza on it's own is really nice, but when read all together, the meter is off. Though what you say is good. When reading it aloud is comes out a little awkward because the stanzas have different syllable counts. I enjoyed what you have here and it doesn't have to change at all if that is your desire. I just wanted to give some friendly advice(from my perspective). Don't stop expressing yourself because you have talent! Anthony