Come Back Daddy
Papu why you left me alone
I am surrounded with tears
In this barren home
I really miss you a lot
But could not express my lonely thoughts
How to call you back my sweet papu
Life has become a hell
And I have lost all feelings of living it well
I miss the time I had lived with you
Because there is no one who can care as did you
No one asks me for my choices
You are gone taking away
Your scolded voices
I really miss everything of yours
What should I do to call you back
Without you I have became an empty tag
Now there is no taste
Now there are no feelings
And there is no love and no heartfull blessings
Because all it was I had shared with you
I am left in tears with the love that was so true
Who will take me for a ride at your chetak
Who will support me and wish me good luck
I think life has to be spent just in your memory
How will I live is the only story
"..One who will bring my Daddy back
I will give him his world's happiest thing
Because I have lost it.."
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This is a fab write, well done on your nom,well deserved.
Your friend Mark.
Thanks a lott my Friend..!! I am glad you liked it..:)
Regards and Love
Surabhi..:)
awsome write sweets!
Papa is always with us all!
yeaahh Sister..I know that..:) Thankss a lott for ur lovely comments..:)
Love
Surabhi..!
many congratulations on being nominated!
Thankuuu sweetiiee..:)
Luvv yaa..:)
Thank you Sister..:)
:) I'm happyy you got connected to it..:)
I don't wanna comment on the rating but my heart is heavy after reading this,you are amazing surabhi..Keep it up dear.I feel like to read more of your work..
cheers ,
Piusha.
Thank youu soo muchh dear...I am really glad you loved my work..!! When someone too close to us is lost and without them life is like living in a hell..it does'nt have any meaning..We just live..by not even knowing why we are..and thats what I felt when I lost my father..!
Keep writing..!
Regards
Surabhi
Reminds me of when my father died when I was 10 I would stare at the mirror and pray for him to return hoping his hand would find my should and id see him once again,very moving piece thank you
Thank youu dear Tim..:) I am glad you got connected with my poem..! Yeah I can feel what has happened with you ..Not to worry dear..He is with us always...at least we can satisfy us by believing this..
Thanks a lott for your lovely comment..:)
Good write surabhi .....you laid your heart into this piece ...beautiful! Tina x
Thank youuu Tina for your beautiful comment...I am really touched..:)
Love u always
Heya Surabhi
Thought I commented on this write a while ago...my appologies..xx
A beautiful, moving write hun xx
Heii Dear Friend...Thank youuu soo muchh for stopping by and commenting...I am soo haappyy u liked it..:)
Love uu hun :)