Poem -
Come Ended
When I say I always leave someone
Better off than when I met them
I never meant that when I'm gone
They found the answer to their problem
The point I was tryna get across
Was the fact that I am the savior
It might feel like I'm tryna be the boss
When I'm correcting unflavored behavior
I don't know how, nor I do why
I attract all these do it yourselfers
But I understand, and they can't deny
I get them closer to being "Top Shelfers"
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- Ashley McRitchie
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Hi Ashley,
Fair enough but I think you need
to dig a bit deeper to get the message across.
Regards,
Terry.
I agree... this and the couple before it used to be scraps of paper resembling unfinished writes. They are starting to become undecipherable so decided to post them unfinished. Marked them only for myself with "..." But believe me there's more to come. I started it a while ago when I thought a relationship was ending...but we decided to keep kicking at a dead horse. Until just yesterday, when he officially ended us. Rightfully so though...Onward while upward i hope for us both