come rain or shine.
As the rain falls down,
A freshness amongst the ground,
Fading away all sorrows,
Of yesterday,
Some thoughts fragmented stay,
Trapped inside,
Shall never Wash away,
They seem to be the strongest,
Pain,
Always remains,
Like teardrop stains,
Withstanding heavy forcing rain,
I guess its the soul,
that never shall drain,
The waterfalls of innocence,
Flowing streams inside,
A collection of love,
Never left dry,
A moment in life,
A mention a day,
Never leaving the side to stray,
Strongest love,
As painful be,
Lives on deep inside of me,
Come rain or shine,
Upon days end,
Longing for shelter,
Stretching nor bend,
Trapped this love,
This hurt,
Until we meet again ,
No forcing rain,
to numb the pain,
Upon reunite shall end the fight,
Then all shall mend,
No breaks desensitized,
Until i look upon your adoring eyes,
Seeking shelter once again,
But wrapped up tight,
Within your love ,
To start this river again.
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Nardine, Nardine,
Lady what an honor shall this be to be the first to comment on this beautiful poem and the entire poem, was a love song sung by all lovers whom has faced the destruction of a shattered love gone days by......You have a wonderful way of not just gathering but capturing and holding the attention of all of your readers, alluringly and through captive of your mesmerizing poetic prowess. This poem flowed so freely in style and so rhymaticly placed together, it was as though my stomach was becoming once again increasingly hungry, for what my eyes were so privilege, to have had the chance, to have read.... (A lovers melody not sung but recited ever so gently and warm in this poem). Definitely loved the entire flow of this one... You truly are a gifted writer and each and every poem, boast of your talent, even if you are too modest of a lady and poetess  to do so,(I AM SURE YOU WELL KNOW)......Wonderful poems from a wonderful Lady, Poetess and Friend.....The pedestal you sat upon, with your style and technique, is one of higher than high quality and I bow graciously below your feet, for you just as your poem, is royalty to us all…. lady Nardine….You will always be my inspiration my dear friend, always….I ENJOYED THE ENTIRE POEM......
As my partner Wolf would say, (You rock dear lady, you truly rock),
JimÂ
Dearest jimmy its always a pleasure to hear from your loving mind, you bring a deep smile to my face dear friend, as i sat within the morning rain, memories floods within, only warmth upon my skin upon loving him,
i lost my first love at an early age, 15 years ago, but every moment, every detail no matter what i do in life still lingers fresh to mind, a forever bind, nothing can take it away, not even forcing rain,
that love that loss, that pain, will forever reside inside my heart, my mind, never to part,
thank you dearest friend with all my heart for your loving kindness which surrounds me when we speak, take care of yourself you are indeed a man of all men and a soul of all souls beseem xoxo love to you sweetheart, your friend Nardine xoxo
True love never ever shall be for gotten, my dear friend, no matter how much time, showers the attended gardens of our hearts past lives. Only a life forever to be interrupted, with flooded reminders, well wishes, as well as, those wishes, that were not so well, although even they, will always carry their own sentimental values, which  will resignate  forever in a day, in our hearts and mind…..It appears dear lady, that it is raining all over this world, for here to, the time is approaching (1:40 am)and the rain, drops loud, long and continuously, upon my roof, interrupting, rather than assisting, in a nights good slumber. I truly hope you peace of mind Nardine, for it I am sure is well over due and truly owed you. Memories such as those described by you, can never be washed away and you can hear and feel it in your writing, as we collaborate, that you truly do still hurt, from your past but you are a real trooper, by all means and being able to keep your head high and talk of it, to your many family here on this site, proves it…You are family and when you, as well as any other need to be heard, even if for a moment, all accommodations, shall always be given, without any means of malice attached…You are a wonderful person, lady and dear friend and I hope all your many wishes, wants, dreams and desires, turn table and find you, rather than you receiving it, through the clichéd, awaited norm.Have you ever been told, your comments are as influential as your unavoidable poem?? Proud of your strength Nardine and always am i to be found in your corners, my dear friend....Hope your day, returns sunny and bright, even through the many expelled rain drops, on this showery day......
Sincerely,
Jim
Dearest friend Jimmy, thank you sweetheart, i appreciate your loving word, the rain i find soothing upon my roof at night within the darkness, brings my soul such ease, hopefully you can rest your loving head upon sleep soon,
i love that you are kind to say, "Have you ever been told, your comments are as influential as your unavoidable poem??" i never really thought about it that way, but i am grateful for you having said such comforting words, i am indeed lucky to have you here in Cosmo funnel family, supporting me and many others, you are a very cherish soul dear Jimmy, love to you always, your friend and run away train nardine Sanderson xoxo
Thank you dear lady,
You are  a wonderful lady and friend Nardine and all, will surely be well, for you and i have a great big prayer for you, "As i lay" tonight and by far, your train, is one in full control, traveling ever so smooth and inviting to all, with your proud whistle blowing, to be heard ever so clear, from miles around...Routing for you always....
Jim
Thank you dearest Jimmy,
sweet dreams to you sweetheart,
may you wake refreshed upon light of a brand new day,
your spirit shinning through out the day,
remembering your soul is pure in which ever choice you make,
may your heart never feel lonely upon the turns you take,
you are well loved here,
amongst the friendship you easily make xoxo god bless ,
well xx love to you nardine xx