Poem -
Comfort Zone
Coming on in leaps and bounds
surveying all that he surrounds
banging on his playpen
nearly knocking it over again
think he’s gone to big for that thing
maybe a hang from the door swing
I got him a walker
he just sits stillÂ
becomes a talker
it seems that once he’s given the freedom
no longer wants it, more secure in his kingdom
maybe its out of his comfort zone?
makes him feel lost and alone
Is this the same for all of us
banging the walls, making a fuss
if our every wish was granted
would we suddenly feel stranded?
if we live without hope
pretty soon we run out of scope
we need something to rebel against
otherwise our thoughts are filled with angst
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Comments
Susan,
The many leaps and bounds of growing up, not only for our young but for we the adults as well. That comfort zone will soon be gone and the new, just as life, will we be left by it, staring us right in the face....We've got to learn to sometimes give a lot, in order to gain a little and you have did as such in this true to life poem..But in this case you gave a lot in this poem as it pertains to advice in life and i am sure will receive a whole lot of responses...Delivery simply marvelous and clearly understood.....
Jimmy Â
Hi Jimmy thanks for reading and commenting you are very kind it is much appreciated and my first posting of a poem was a big step out of my comfort zone but it now gives me such joy reading and sharing all the best susan x
We too are appreciative to be allowed within the confinements of your comfort zone of lovely poems and all that you submit, are done in taste for all to marvel over and relax to its readings, from beginning to its ending....
Jim Â
thank you x
We will never know the depth of the water if we don't stick a toe are two in as our guide....Cheers Susan.
JimÂ
ah great advice which i will take on board and I've been told anyone who doesn't drop a few balls has no balls to catch lol x
thanks Williamsjl x
This was a really really nice poem.. I read it over a couple times and it really is a great piece.. keep the "Good shit" coming lol
What a compliment thanks so much glad you enjoyed cheers x