Poem -

Making me hate myself

author
Lini

With every comment 
I felt like the knot tightening around my neck 

Every comment kicked me down more 

With every comment 

A tear dropped  

My breath stocked

A piece of my confidence got robbed 

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Lini...

You're in the healing phase...

​​​​​Wipe your tears when you feel better...

Find something...

​​​​​​Now, smile to you and your heart...

Ready?

Keep going...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Lini

Thank you :)

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