Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

author
pepper

Hi,your piece just got me thinking.Most humans live and die without ever knowing who they are.We live a large part of our lives focusing on the unimportant things and worrying that we forget take a minute to be with ourselves,to get to know ourselves better in order to love and appreciate who we are and to be able to live with ourselves. 
we are distracted so much so that we fail to realize when we are in tune with ourselves thus we eventually stray into becoming complete strangers before realizing how lost we are . 
conscious write .
Toju

Reply
Poem -

Aberration

Short freestyle poem

Aberration

A mind weighed down by what is and what may be...

A heart stuck between desire and a yearning...

Poem -

2/25/25

Safety Check

2/25/25

Holding the pieces of me together like shattered glass

Bruises mark the futile attempt at a...

Poem -

Beauty Within the Pain

Beauty Within the Pain

I black out like ski masks
apt to relapse at the deadly addiction to pain
Within such a...

Latest poems in Freestyle

Poem -

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES....

A DAWN BREAKS

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES....

A DAWM BREAKS
The dawn mist melts down,
On the shoulders of your
Green valley swiftly...

Poem -

BROKEN WORDS

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES....

BROKEN WORDS

BROKEN WORDS
The word was imperfect
and broken half way,
before it took it's shapes...

Poem -

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES.....

REVELATIONS

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES.....

REVELATIONS
Revelations from your cherished words,
Echoes in my inner mind like love birds...

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com