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With eyelids heavy,
And a heart is full,
Desire creeps in
As the black night falls.
This never forgiven path
Can only sit upon she,
Never another's shoulders
As they come before thee.
As dreams become wild,
Reality kicks in,
With a vicious taste
Of the red wine spilled.
They lack the understanding
Of her poor hearts desire,
She doesn't spill red,
For meer fun and pleasure.
Doing what told,
What he has her do,
The terrible nightmares...
They will never subdue.
But her heart
Yearns for love,
That will soon release her,
Yes, her one true love,
From the awful cursed one
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Comments
Love it.....enjoyed the read
super write!
Hey KAITLYN!.....Β I canΒ feel a sense of loneliness and pain In this piece........ as though there were chains that needed to broken free.......a compelling narrative for sure.........ALL STARS........ well done .......and..........WELCOME to COSMO!!......... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo.Β ?
Ps. CONGRATS on the nomination!!..... good luck!!Β Β ?
terrific poetry, layered with a compelling narrative whispering between the lines, the reader likes the way you wrote this, like a letter, personal, intimate....very well done, hope the nomination encourages you to post many more, cheers and looking forward
Β Hi Kaitlyn GreatΒ compelling write
Β IΒ felt a sadness while readingΒ
But a superbly written pieceΒ
Great write!Β
Best wishes DebsΒ
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excellently written poetry linda