Criticize

Ā Go ahead.
Criticize!
I enjoy the rise.
Nothing blooms a roseĀ
like a mentalĀ
compromise.
I eat thatĀ
without even
Ā searing the sides.
Raw meet ,
Ā
blood on my paper. Ā
Grizzle on my pencil
Il draw you withoutĀ
using a stencil.
Bring some saltĀ
Because IāmĀ
fresher thanĀ
lentil.
Thought I hit the blockĀ
Then the tikĀ
started to TokĀ
and I Beat the shitĀ
right out of the clock.
BaneĀ is the fame.
And insane is the game
And Iāve been at thisĀ
Since Iām 17.
Not a big fan of rap
But when the words are phat
I seem to have a nackĀ
In fact.
Like Tesla
369 .
Havent got a dime
Wright it down 3 times.
Cant Tip the bar
But I can play the guitar
Like Clapton.
Right the notes on a napkin.
Born as a lionĀ
the sun is my pride
And thatās noĀ
exaggeration.
If criticism is what you give
Iām on top of this hill.
Saturdayās could kill!
If Friday donāt
..so take your time.
Rock is around
and itās still a Rollin
Its only here to makeĀ you proud.
Ā

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Comments
Edward, what a gifted mind you have.Ā love your poem.Ā Terry KayĀ
God love you terry thanks. yours as well
I have been reading.thanksĀ
much abliged
I hate rap but sometimes if Iām not working on any thing il
free verse lol
thanks guys Iām extteramly thank full for your kind words ?
I do enjoy your stuff :)
Very creative and well written.Ā We use whatever tools we can in order to get a poem flowing, after all its all expression of our soul.
You couldent have said it better perfect example of that here lol
thsnk you Simon I admire your work as well