Poem -

Crumble Love

Crumble Love

Our relationship

Once solid and steady

A fortress strong

we believed to be

forever forged in steel

In reality 

you and me

are as fragile

as a paper mache flower

If we can't patch this up

before we bleed out
and lose loving power

it may be time
for us to part company

and regrettably go

our separate ways

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BLOSSOM

A sad situation well conveyed Steve. Your structure I thought, worked really well.  I liked the simplicity and direct message.  Some very nice lines in there, and I liked the title lol!  A vote from me:)

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