CRY FOR THE MOON
I miss the moon
For she no longer visitsÂ
To wax and wane the doom
Some say she has journeyed
far
Away from sad earth's dying
star
Some say that it broke her so
To know that she must go
Others say Mars stole her love
That she shines beside Great
Red above
A glowing beauty deep in love
And I hope that this is true
But I cry for her most endless
nights
For I miss her sacred magic
light
And I fear the gaping empty
black
As I whisper to her, please
come back
But some say that we killed her
dead
That we loved her not enough,
it's said
That she died up there in hurt
and angst
Though I think that this is lies
But I worry what became of her
As I stand in black night's
lonely air
Staring at a moon shaped hole
That once held proud her
moon shaped soul
And I cry for her most endless
nights
For tis so so cold without her
light
And I'm scared, so scared of
the empty black
Oh moon, oh moon, please
please come back...
Marion Price(2020)
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wonderful poem
Thankyou Greg...what would we do without you on here...very much appreciate lovely man ...hugs ?
i dont know what i do if i wasnt on here
i would be more loney i think
Aw...you will never be lonely Greg...you have US...????
Thank you you’re such a good friend you and JillÂ
We are a little cyber family Greg...always ?
Yes we are
Awww pinned ❤️❤️❤️
Thankyou Jill...you sweetheart, appreciate it love ...hugs ?
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Love the imagery! I wrote a poem about the earth that I will share in the coming months that talks about the moon, this reminds me of it and wish it had been this good!
Jim...you write beautifully and I look forward to reading your work, I will keep an eye out for the one you mentioned also. Thankyou for your lovely comment my friend...hugs ?
Good Marion - it will come back although
sometimes a quarter of what it was before!
Terry.
x
Lol...thanks Terry ?
Cool write Marion loved it.
Thanks so much Simon, so sorry for late reply ?
Marion i have this photo that came up
on my coumrter of monmouth walesÂ
do you live close to it very beautiful
place some day i want to go Â
Hi Greg, sorry for late reply. I am about 70 miles from Monmouth ...I have only ever passed through I'm ashamed to say, it's on our hit list though...?
Oh Marion.... You have nailed it in these words! Absolutely nailed it. The whole poem is absolutely gorgeous. Sad, lonely and desperate... But oh so very beautiful with it! This is truly an amazing poem. I feel I can connect to this poem. I adore this poem, so pinned of course! There are so many poems around that rhyme for rhymes sake and some that do not rhyme that should and a great many that have no flow. Your poem here has flow, rhyme and emotion that is just sublime. All of your work is to such a high standard and this one is among the very best. Hugs x
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Oh Tina, thankyou as ever for your truly beautiful and supportive comment....the night and all its gifts inspire me so much...sitting in the dark atmosphere...of course my neighbours think I'm crazy when they see me out at ten past midnight...lol...sorry for late reply..hugs ?
Marion this is an absolute masterpiece! Love it!
Thankyou so much Derani...so appreciated love ?