Crying Out
Trapped in this dark place
It feels like there's no escape
Gasping for air
I'm so anxious to catch my breath
Fighting to get out of this nightmare
And run to the arms of someone who cares.
My eyes are getting blurry
My legs are getting numb
My body is getting weak
I'm losing my voice
I can't hardly speak
I'm getting breathless
Struggling to stay alive
I don't want to lose my life
I'm not ready to die.
Crying out! for help
So someone could hear me
I think it's too late
I'm losing my life slowly
I'm starting to see a bright light
I'm dying
Crying out! Father please save me! Please rescue me!
Taking my last breath
Now all I see is pure darkness
I've come to my death.
I'm still crying out! from underground
surrounded by dead people all around
I want to come back to life
I can't take this heat
It's constantly burning
Over and over again
It seems like there's no end.
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Comments
Leesaan! Wow! Truly a dark and frightening write. "I've come to my death"…into the abyss, into the dark, into the burn with no way of escape. Your imagery is so very descriptive it pulls the reader further into the burn with each line. Well done!
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Thank You.
"My eyes are getting blurry
My legs are getting numb
My body is getting weak
I'm losing my voice
I can't hardly speak
I'm getting breathless
Struggling to stay alive..."
Leesaan you have a good chorus
going here, the poem is song like
dark and emotive; it hangs together well and you've done a good writing job here by keeping the reader anxious through the piece, well done; Luv Jai :)