CRYSTAL AND CLEAR

He takes his time to die
Amazed at the beauty
The Armageddon green
Cat's Eye
He lies still
His heart a soft soft flutter
Cradled in comfort
Never known before
The satins and velvets
The silky soft paw
Only the fear was painful
Gone now
The pathway so crystal
His destiny so clear
His eyes catch a glimpse
Of the great trees above
Hears the call of his friends
Feels the song of their love
His home
Beloved and glowing
Emerald and bronze
He see's a wind stir the branches
See's some leaves weep and fall
A great foliage of friendship
Where his colours were
known
He sends thanks to the great
trees
For the shelter of home
It strikes him that
His whole life has known
green
Meadows and marshes
Flowing rivers and streams
The greens and the yellows
All the blues
Birthed between
He fades now
Within the diamonds of light
No fear
No malice
No blood shed
No fight
Just the hushed lull of green
As it soothes him away
It's just nature he thinks
It is just mother's way
All things die in green
To rebirth back to blue
He feels Grace raise him
gently
Into lifetimes, anew
Marion Price(2020)

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Comments
Awww Marion, such a wonderful wonderful read. Simply no other way to put it. Great write. All the best. The Fish of the Sea.
Thankyou my friend, truly appreciated, sorry for late reply ?
Marion you are ‘Simply the best’ pinned of course my poetic genius???
Aw thankyou for your lovely comment and support Jill...I really appreciate it love..hugs ?
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what great poem
Thankyou lovely man...so sorry for late reply..hugs ?
A natural but brutal act... A cat catches a bird. And kills it. Nature is both beautiful and cruel all at the same time. A poem written on this theme could've been tackled in many ways by many poets. But there is not one single poet who could've written this as well, or as beautifully, or as empathically, or as masterfully as you, Marion. This here poem is one of exquisite beauty, it really, really is. You've nailed this to absolute perfection and polished it to dazzle. Amazing, wonderful, beautiful and soulful. I absolutely love this gem of a poem. Wow! You have such a flair with words. This is one beautiful dose of soulfood.
R.I.P little birdie. ?
Naughty pussykins. ?
Beautifully written, Marion. ✒️?
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Tina, when I read this I just thought how lovely you are to go into so much depth and offer such supportive feedback...I'm so touched and very honoured by your comment. It means so so much...thankyou zillions my friend..hugs ?
And every word the truth x
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Great write Marion. Warm regards.
Thankyou so so much Cleo...hugs ?
Beautiful and touching.
Thankyou so much Stephen ?