Poem -
CRYSTAL FLOWERS
How we twirled In the glittering snow
Arms raised high outstretched and wide
Wanting to own that snowglobe night
That beautiful fairytale ride
How we laughed as the iced diamonds fell
Covering our joyous heads
And begged the snow gods
Make it last, this swirling frozen blast
How we danced feather light
Crunched footprints in the softest snow
Delighted on a chill winds blow
In the snowy crown of night
And how we lived in those moments
Of perfect icy dance
Two glorious crystal flowers
So utterly entranced.
Marion Price (2019)
Comments
Marionette,
You could write gorgeous lines about socks if you wanted to.
That was exquisite. You create beautiful visions with your words.
Fantastic title, and 'iced diamonds', so great.
Another wonderful poem.
Loved it.
Matthew.
Poem about socks coming up ..soon..lol. thanks my friend 💕
Sock song for a lonely journey created🤣...check.it out and BEST it...I challenge you lol😃😄😆
Beautiful words luv ❤️
Oh thankyou Jill...me and Mathew are in a sock competition..want to join us...check out above..lol 😁😁
Bedtime in uk xx 💙
I am in UK...Wales...the land of song and sock poems😆..night love 💕
Hi Marion....Children sure know how to make a wintry day a fun adventure and appreciate every little nuance of the icy weather. I could see those crystal flowers....Great imagery! I enjoyed the chilly scene. xo ;)
Thanks Cherie, this one needs a little work I think but I'm all poemed out at the moment, it can wait to be edited at a future date, I think too many poems, the words are beginning to look like meaningless squiggles on the page, I will spend some time reading instead of writing I think 💕