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Crystal Surreality

Crystal Surreality

Waters of joy falls from your eyes,
Luminous lusters of shining dreams.
Minuscule flashes like fireflies
From nights of dazzling moonbeams.

Walls of dew glistens so bright
Caves of stardust at night we gaze.
Birds of paradise, rainbow in flight
Like a screaming sunburst ablaze.

Rocks they form floating temples
With corals of vast texture and hue.
Nature sounds of mini ensembles
Your heart and mind they flew.

These could convince you’re in reality
But it’s just dreams of surreal oceans.
You could paint it in canvas with ability
As it takes time and a lot of patience.

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Tony Taylor

Hey JEFFERSON!!..... what an impressive début piece!!.....a perfect adherence to your A,B,A,B, rhyme scheme...... with great word choices that promote 'oh so beautifully' the outstanding imagery of your "Crystal Surreality" (cool title by the way)..... this piece, as a whole, literally shimmers and shines its way right off of the page and into the readers mind's eye!!......ALL STARS!!...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered brother poet!!...... and.....WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳

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