Poem - 04 April 2017, 18:23 Damage Yashika Smith I can't see your face I only look to your soul I don't hear your words Your actions are too cold Who broke your heart? Who caused this anomaly? Can I fix you? or will you just break me? YRS Like 1 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 490 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Deepthinking Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Heart Listed in: Contest Entries 2 comments
Jason Brown04 April 2017, 18:52 Can I fix you? or will you just break me? I love the antithesis here, which seems to be in danger of splitting this wonderfully crafted poem apart. There's a crystalline elegance to the way you press your thoughts into verse. You're a very welcome addition to this site. J ;) Reply
Yashika Smith04 April 2017, 18:59 Thank you, Creator! It is a privilege to share bits of my soul all while feeling others; yours include. YRS Reply
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I love the antithesis here, which seems to be in danger of splitting this wonderfully crafted poem apart.
There's a crystalline elegance to the way you press your thoughts into verse.
You're a very welcome addition to this site.
J ;)
Thank you, Creator! It is a privilege to share bits of my soul all while feeling others; yours include.
YRS