Dancing In Lovers
My angel doth move at midnight's behest
Loving in truth and rejoicing in dancing's request
She whispers to me, "Wilt thou not dance along,
For thusly we shall melt into this lovers song!"...
It is I that so deeply and reverently need to know
That lovers dance, for a vernal need to show
True love's seeds ablaze, in partnering's intuition
"Wilt thou not dance with me in love's potential for fruition?"...
"Can'st thou not feel my heart upon your skin as we minuet?"
In each touch of my hand, in each rotation I'm swimming in your scent
And verily I am swept away in dancing's lovely inventions
Like the Paris I see in your eyes underlying, romantic, intentions...
Does God with forethought reveal love's light, dancing in Lovers
For it is a most holy experience to dance anew and discover
A tender heart beating as one's own, in love's divine ballet
Where previously there was one, there are two this holy day...
Oh what joyous discoveries
Await,
Dancing in Lovers .....
Tony Taylor
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Absolutely charming write ! Delightful. Your poetry on love and related romantic interludes captures the magic and essence of lifes greatest gift.
Wishing you the very best ! :)
Wow!! Thanx SIR WATERS!!...... what a great comment ......you KNOW I appreciate this VERY much my friend ........you help keep me rollin' brother poet......... hugs-n-smiles .......your cyber-friend......tony xo. ?☀✴✳
:) Take care.
What a divine image...small, personal and yet profound and universal.
A love song...in the truest, purest, most heartwarming sense of the term.
Bravo, my friend!
J ;)
Wow!!:.......I REALLY didn't expect this much response JASON!!.......using classical English terminology is tricky...... especially trying to update it........thanx so much for taking time with it.....I DO SO appreciate the fine comments brother poet!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?☀✴
Excellent
Thanx LORRIS.......smiles.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
Beautiful poem where your words danced in clever and romantic unison x
Thanx WENDY!!....... appreciate your taking the time with it sister girl!!...... hugs-n-smiles!!......T xo. ?☀✴
Simply beautiful, well done Beastie.
Love G xx
Thanx GEORGINA!!...... so good to see you on my page sweetheart......I know I need to keep in better touch....... I'm on it!!........ hugs-n-smiles!!.........T xo. ?♥✴☀♥♥♥
This is entirely different from your usual...I doubt if I've seen you rhyme before...You're good at everything you do...The words dance on my tongue while I read this gorgeous piece...The picture is stunning...You pulled this perfectly!!...LOVE and ROCKETS!!
Thanx Your ROSE-NESS!!...... actually I have done many writes with perfect rhyme schemes in mind........ it's just that I feel more comfortable in poetic prose for some reason...... but I'm a songwriter...... so rhyming is a big part of my background.......thanx so much for pointing that out....... you're a pretty groovy chick!-........ big smiles!!...:..T xo. ?✳✴☀♥♥
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Whether it be abiding by ancient Judaic Law, and dancing only coupled by a piece of clothe, or doing the "Forbidden Lambada", joined in every inch of the body, love's dance titillates the heart and exasperates the soul. Although, sometimes dance can be used nefariously. As Herod promised Salome the head of John The Baptist on a silver platter, if she would but perform for him, "The Dance of the Seven Veils". Yet most times it is used to honor and love, as the beautiful maidens dancing round the pole on Mayday.
We dance to the music of our souls
Such joyous discoveries await
Peace, Love and Rockets,
Larry xxx
My Dear Brother Poet LARRY!!
I am unabashedly inflamed and motivated with these most precious words...... your knowledge and kind heart NEVER fail to fan the flames of my passion for writing......I'll,never be able to repay you....... but someday we WILL meet...... and THAT will be a very good day!!....... Love you bro!!....... peace and hair grease!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
All I ask in payment, is on the day we meet, you take out your guitar, and we do some killer duets together. I cannot wait for that day. Love you too, Bro!
Peace and Brylcreem back at you,
Larry xxx
Hi Tony Wonderful poem got to read it a couple of times
to truly take in the beauty of your lines and for me they stay in my mind
always. I love the old English words giving your write
the feel it was written by one of the great poets of years gone by
the subject matter is heavenly of the dance creating a romantic setting
for two people in love
I love this pinned Love n hugs Debs xo
Wow!! Thanx so much DEBS!!..... yes I seem to think in olde English...... that little voice inside my head seems to have a British accent!?...... weird right?....... but it does affect my reading list...... and influence the way I write....... you know how much I appreciate your insights......thanx again for this motivating comment....... high fives!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀
Wow Tony ... Every time I'm surprised more the way you write ... I'm glad I like it a lot and this part ... "In each touch of my hand, in each rotation I'm swimming in your scent" .. I had time without writing you ... thanks for sharing ... kisses and hugs ...
Silvylove :)