Dark Angel
She comes a vision, in tattoos adorned
And whispers of what could become of we
I listened as she lifted temptation
As though it were a fruit from the forbidden tree
When my heart of hearts spoke to me...
The beginning of all evil temptation lies in an unsure mind
Just as a rudderless ship is buffeted between the vines
So the negligent and inconstant man, smitten by many a temptation
Forgets what he can actually accomplish through holy contemplation
A man's spiritual progress is put to the test by trials and tribulations
But by resolutely bearing up under them, is revealed a divine imagination
Like a lightning rod of Love he can light up his soul
By allowing the truth of all of him to be told
And when the beauty of a woman gives rise to temptation
He must follow his heart to the inner outermost part of recreation
The place where God holds the light
Helping to shed light on what's right
And whispers of faith
That help men create
Love,
In an angel
A dark angel,
Tempting the unsure mind
With the treasures,
He might,
Find...
Tony Taylor
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Well thought out poem linda
Hey LINDA love!! (smiles).....thanks for this....... always a pleasure my friend........ peace.......ttyl........T xo. ?☀✴✳
This was truly a breath of fresh air for me. IOt flowed very well and definately spoke to me. In love with this!
Wow!! What a "way cool" comment BRITTNEY!!.......I don't think I know your stuff...... on my way there right now!!........thanx for this girlfriend.......big smiles!!.......Txo,,?☀✴✳
lol No problem! It is a great piece! The only thing I regret is that I didn't leave a longer comment1 But I was in awe when I read it, so it was the first thing I thought of reading it.
A magnificent work showcasing your creative mind !!
A warning here to those of fragile values and wavering principles. There will be a reconciliation of actions and consequences, under the spotlight of faiths and civilizations requirements, with judgement being severe for those not following a straight worthy path.
Your poetry is always thought-provoking being carefully considered to maximize effect. You have a gift and use it well my friend.
Take care. Hug. :)
Wow!! Thanx SIR WATERS!!...... so good to see you back on the pages brother poet!!....... your words bring me such a happy glow....... just to know you are here......it's just not the same site without you around..........thanx again for the positive and most insightful comment...... where recognizing my intent is beautifully conveyed as the warning of remaining true to self and the God we all carry inside as a gift the we have a responsibility to maintain........ you're awesome my friend!!........ be well........ Love to you and yours!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳
:) Take care my friend.
"A man's spiritual progress is put to the test by trials and tribulations
But by resolutely bearing up under them, is revealed a divine imagination"
Trials and tribulations are to really test how strong our faith is and to strenthen us the more...There is always a way out of every tempation so that we stand up under it...Thank God who has made that possible for us....Thanks for sharing this soul lifting piece...LOVE and ROCKETS!!
Hi brother Tony, like Dblankportrait and Rose Sho, I would also choose the same words """"""!
We will always face trials and tribulations for as long as we live - to put us to the test!! Pulling ourselves from it takes patience and God shall fight for it!! We glory in tribulations!! you and Cherie always give life to poetry!!
Love and hugs
Leah