The Dark is Not My Home
Life we breath we are all different whether we like it or not
Yet so misconceived upon your eyes which travels in fear
To one's happiness is another one's tear which i have sought
For trapped in this midnight train that seems to be near
Oh how the engine roars for how forgetful you left me trapped
breaking and falling as the blind once did shows new meaning to my side
Over coming with a break to my emotions you have snapped
No laughter comes from the tears that once have died
Is this my end for i see nothing no hope for self return
How much longer does yet a persons heart hold to agony i will dread
I take it for my inside personality is much weaker to you i have learned
Call once whom i cried wolf depression paths i begin to tread
I hear no goodness yet i see no evil for life which you remain
Tired, hurt, frightened from running shadows you haunted
Fire you burn play your move yet is this your game
Run and hide while you can for my screams just turned to barking
Now call out your name i demand in honor which i strongly stand
For i'm sick of being here for no sight picture burns as you simply stand alone
Yet so unorganized and now well trained you weren't disciplined on command
Tis this nightmare be over calm bring me the light for the dark is not my home!!!
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very good piece!!
Thank you i read one of yours and i liked it..You have some great talent!!!!
bring me the light for the dark is not my home!!!
Wow, wow, wow. This line should be memrized for every time we loose hope in the hands of fear.
Great work.
Thank you so much i really try i do i'm 17 years old and well i hope to make it as far as you and some of these other people so congratulations to you to!
Greetings Kyle,
The dark never to be kept at hand, will I linger, in times span...A man in search of love, once he had brandish, as his pride and joy and to he, she without the asking, responded. Now not to be,at his beckoned call. Now he seeks her through long journeys and tear stained eyes and body of tired and worn, his only means of solace, is his hope and self comfort, to himself, that one day his dark, will be replaced, with the light, he has allowed to elude him, when simple words not spoken, gave haste, to her now gone..The night is a place, testy and terrible, to have ventured alone, when someone who loves you,is now not to be seen. His will not to be defeated, he's forced to move on, his heart, a light lit candle, though this darkness, continue to remain pitch dark strong...A very powerful poem of devotion, to ones love, has he lost, yet in his heart, never to be forever gone and his search for her, shall forever be ongoing and to he, remain strong...A very nice poem indeed...
Warmest Regards,
Jim
Thank you Jim i appreciate what you said that means a lot really thanks!!
impressive poem here for being so young.lot of feelings that we can all understand at some point or another.well done. tina