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Dark Shimmer

Dark Shimmer

I saw you fall
I saw you dead
I saw you inside
The memorie is still in my head

I saw you cry out loud
I saw how your tears fell
I saw the pain in your eyes
I wish that I could help

But you're like a ticking bomb
Waiting for an end
If I let you inside,
Then I too shall end up dead 

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GREG TUCKER THE...

so true in life sometimes.  I really enjoyed this one.  Very good my friend

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M A

Thank you!

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Tony Taylor

Hey MARIAM!!......this is VERY well crafted poetry with VERY compelling subject matter at its core......It's hard to let someone you know will self destruct at anytime completely into your life.....no matter how much you care about them......That instinct you have for self preservation is there for a reason.....and you've expressed all of that BEAUTIFULLY here!!.....well conceived and powerfully delivered!!......ALL STARS!!.,.....Well done dear poet sister.,.....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!...........T xo ??✴✴??✴❤?

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M A

Ohh thank you so much!! Im really glad to hear that!!

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