Poem -
DARK SIDE
There is a dark side to
everything.The moon, light, life.
You sought it out, embraced
it, now you can't see anything
at all. Silly of you.You tear out
my eyes, I love you. You bleed
me. Silly of you.
Now, we are both blind
M P 26/3/21
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Desperate, and a little bitter, but a Super clever write. How you manage to pack such emotions in so little words inspires me. Although, not that this is about me, but when I saw the title it did think back to one my swing and a homerun poem. So thank you for taking me back there Marion!
Hiya Max...lovely to see you..well, you know what I mean. Not quite sure what you mean...I think the words rewrote themselves, happens to me all the time. Do you mean you wrote a similar poem? Anyway thanks for taking the time love X
Ah sorry Marion, perhaps being cryptic comes from my account name eh? Also yeah, commenting on my phone doesn't help, I meant to say, yes I did do a similar write, it too was called Dark side, but It wasn't as deep as yours, just a simple astronaut write. It was the first for me, that really bursted with support on Cosmos and inspired me to keep writing as a poet to this day. Sorry again for the miscommunication, you'd think that would be somthing that I was good at :/. Again fantastic write here!
No.its fine...it's the bloody mobiles. My other mobile changes everything I txt, I got to check it all the time...before I throw it. I understand what you mean now...lol. yea, sometimes I put a title in and it comes up that I've already got one by same title and i have to change it...but given I don't even know what I've written I'd never remember anyone elses. Well share...cos we're mate ok 🤩♥️
Awww raw emotions there written poetically so well 💕💕💕
Thanks love ❤️
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There is indeed! Everything needs balance. "To every action there is an opposite and equal reaction" that's part of it all too. You are seeing more than your fair share of dark at the moment so I really hope the light appears soon for you. This is an amazingly raw and real write on pure emotion. Hang on in there and keep going forward... the only way to get out of hell is to keep walking ❤ x
Yes that's so true Tina ...although difficult to do when you don't bother getting up...lol..🤪🤪 ...I'm.up now, I'm really pleased with myself though unfortunately it's nearly bed time again...shame😃 You ok?? How's the writing going?? I really hope it's going well. I will PM.you soon for a chat...hugs 💕
Writings going well thank you (touch wood). Really pleased with today's efforts 😁🤞 fingers crossed it keeps going that way.
At least you managed to get up Marion...yay! Well done 👏👏👏👏👏 x
I'm really glad it's going well love...I am definitely going to buy it when it's finished...keep tapping those fingers!! 😊😊
Sometimes the smallest poems can pack the biggest punch. This is definitely one of those poems. Brimming with so much emotion ❤️
Thanks love 💞
wow! awesome write, a truism, " there must be opposition in all things" I think Max is speaking under water sometimes ! lol!..........................................Jim
I know...I had to.pit on a diving suit and rescue him!! Thanks Jim...appreciated x