Poem -
Darkly Shining (a metamorphosis)
By dark light I determined her shine
By evening's night
And fireflies9
The very sparkling of her shyness
Where golden slumber
Is not fantasized or forgotten
For her dreams lay there
Where Antoninus once,
In a letter,
Dared compare her lovely countenance
To the light of day
Where children play
In the gloriousness of her shine
Which,
At each day's,
End,
Lights the dark night...
Her shine is as a summer's morn
Where buttercups
And busy bees
Conspiring
In summer's breathtaking breeze
Leads the way
Into her shyness
And the Love that shines
From her quintessence
Where true Love is born
And is,
The metamorphosis,
That turns night
Into day
With immeasurable
Accuracy...
Tony Taylor
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As usual.....another Excellent write....Thank You Tony
Thanx LORRIS!!......appreciate the support and for making me smile my friend........ needed that........... hugs-n-smiles!!.......... talk hard!!......... peace ........T xo ,
Thanx again my LOVE .......just had to get that out........ forever......:T xo. ?☀✴✳
Hey Tony...I love this one...I've missed reading your writes...Hope you good...LOVE and ROCKETS!!
Why thanx your ROSE-NESS!!.......miss you my friend!!......VERY MUCH.......wishing you all the best as well!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xl ?☀✴✳
Just beautifully done... no words to describe it... just something to feel!
Congratulations Tony
Hey Thanx RUI .....sorry it took so long to reply.......been busy in the recording studio......appreciate you taking the time with this one.........big smiles......T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony Gorgeous piece it sort of transports you
back somehow into centuries gone by ,it may be the name "Antonius"
sounds Latin to me
Beautiful imagery and superb original phrasing as always
Great write Love n hugs Debs xo
Thanx dear DEBS!!....sorry it took so long to reply......been in the recording studio.......Love that you said it "Tansported" you.......nothing like hearing that from another writer.......LOVE you D!!.......thanx for making me smile girlfriend!!.........you pal!!.......T xo ?☀✴✳
Hi Tony,
a true masterpiece, once again. There's nothing like a love that shines in the dark...
Great work brother!
Love,
Dario
Thanx DARIO!!......I truly appreciate the enthusiasm........but "Masterpiece"?..........I think I'll hang this comment on my wall for inspiration!!.......you're the coolest.......tjamx again bro!!........Peace........T xo ?☀✴✳
Beautiful imagery, my God! Such a great poem!