Poem -
Darkness Within
Darkness swooping all around
Bewitching hour is not to frown
Haunting you through your dreams
Only to make you scream
Scratching so hard at the door
Slithering across the floor
Whispering between the cracksÂ
Only to hear a smack.
Evil lurks within the walls
Screaming down the halls
Looking for a soul to take
Trying to make you break.
Demons are obssesed
Trying to possess
Hiding deep down inside
Waiting for their joyride.
Darkness swooping all around
Draining you without a sound
Holding on with a string
So you do not become a thing.
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Comments
Absorbing manifestations giving a clear demonstration of you capabilities, drawing the reader into elegant phrasing produced with a compelling slant.
Neat work.
Take care.
Warmest wishes. :)
Thank youÂ
:)
Nice & dark, Tara. Just the way I like 'em.
Good aabb rhyme scheme too.
Oh, before I forget, congratulations on your first place finish in the CosmoFunnel Poetry Contest for the month of May.
Good job!
~Dean ??
Thank you Dean they sent an email saying I was in first place so I don't know they might of placed them in the wrong order but either way its exciting I was jumping for joy
Oh, well...that's even better!
They usually place them in the order they finished in the contest.
My bad, congrats!
And hey, don't be such a stranger.
I haven't heard from you lately...
~Dean :(
Yeah I know I'm sorry about that. I stumbled upon writers block here lately and with school out for the kids it's been crazy I've been working on this piece and I don't even know if I like how its going so it's been bugging me I think I'm over thinking it because I can picture it in my mind but having hard time writing it down hmmmm...... Maybe its because I'm working on it to early in the day.Â
No worries... ;)