Poem -

~ DAUGHTER ~

  your beauty unfurls in ethers
               around me

               ​​​​​​I wear you
       breathe your essence
           absorb your light
         borrow your dignity

                        I
         ~ learn from you ~

                     the
       secrets and pathways 
                      to
                spirit love
                    and
                   flight 

            you are oxygen
        on a breathless day
             you are balm
               a comfort
          a leader of ways
       
           ~ quite simply ~

                          I 

             love 

                          you 

            ~~ daughter ~~

Marion Price(2020)
           
                   
        
                

                
                    

 

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Tony Taylor

Hi MARION,
I love the formatting you used to add to this already powerful tribute to your Daughter........The kind of write that is instantly compelling.......VERY moving dear poet sister!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.....Bravo!.........LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo  : )

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Marion

Thanks so much for your kind comment...I really want to write something nice for her but find they read like the verses in birthday cards!! Keep trying lol...💕

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Jill Tait

Awwww truly beautiful & pinned luv❤️❤️❤️

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Marion

Thankyou love 💖

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Being Me

Oh Wow!   I have pinned this because it is exactly how I feel about my daughter too. You have nailed this, Marion. I do hope your daughter gets to read this. This is VERY special. I totally adore this! 👏👏👏👏 xx

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Marion

Hi Tina, I wanted to write something for her birthday but I don't want it to sound like the verse in a card...I'm not sure. Thanks for liking it...hugs 💕

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Being Me

This doesn't sound like anything you would get in a card. Having said that, however, I reckon that some card designers would very much like it to put in their cards if they could 😉 x

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