Poem -
Dave's Doctor
Like 2 Pin it 0Dave needs to listen to his doctor
His doctor knows what's right ...
Over the years
Through the smiles and tears
From the darkest recesses
Back into the light
Fear stops his progression
He needs to open his minds eye further
before it closes...The Rose's mean well
That's their second name
They are both brothersThe Rose's know Dave well
But do not agree
With Dave's lysergic dosesDave...put your faith in me
Do not listen to the Rose's
Dave needs to follow his doctor
Through the parted sea like Moses
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I like this, it's a little twisted and interesting Syd...I enjoyed ?
Thank you. It's a true story. Dave regards me as "his doctor". The poor bloke has been through some tragic losses in his life....but he's still smiling.
A stronger man than me.
Thanks for reading and leaving feedback - Syd
I love the way you begin this. It draws the reader straight in. You know it's going to be dark and you have to keep reading. Poor Dave he seems to be a mixed up soul. He is taking hallucinogenics which his doctor seems to approve of although his friends don't. The last lines, then, are a perfect finish for this poem of yours.
An intriguing write. I agree with Marion x
Thank you for your very in depth comment. You are very accurate in your deciphering of this poem.
I am one of Daves best friends however...and the Rose's...they're good friends also but some people fear LSD as if it were crack cocaine or heroin.
If treated with respect, then it's better than any anti depressants. Dave's no stranger to other hallucinogens by the way....but a lot of people fear LSD.
PS. I'm not a drug pusher either lol. I'm actually a really nice person.
Take care - Syd
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