Poem -
DEAD BIRDS + stuff
The bird is dead
I do not care
God made it so
God put it there
For cats to find
For cats to tear
God made the cats
He put them there
The cats are fed
A bird is dead
I do not care
And that seems fair
God made it so
God made me so
God doesn't care
God's never there
M P 6/7/22
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I have a feeling that God is very different to what a great many people believe!Ā You've used rhyme and flow perfectly to paint a picture of despair. Hugs xx
Thanks love...I do too...possibly a guy with a clipboard and a hard hat programming his machines šššš
this hurts, not because I have a thing about birds, or believe in god, but because I have a thing about friends who I know to be hurting .. some may call that empathy .. I call it being me .. & I aint talkin Tina's neither x
Your kindness Neville has not gone unnoticed or unappreciated lovely man...thankyou from the bottom of my heart. ā¤
Now if you could just help me some more and explain death and where it is, the world and why it is so...and god of course...explain god also...because I get so tired of hurting about the same bloody scenarios day in and day out.
Hugs...many, many to you X
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I'm working on it okay .. x
This is VERY engaging my friend.......and definitely lets the reader know your opinion of God......but life is more than opinion.....and I for one....care...that the bird is dead.....just as I fear death itself......this is thought provoking stuff dear poet sister!!....ALL STARS!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoĀ : )
Hi Tony, lovely to see you back. Maybe this is a clear indication of my feelings on god at the very instance I wrote it my friend.
"I'm afraid I sway like the wind Every second of most every day
In a spiritual crisis
That just won't go away"
A little poem to sum up the inner workings of a place where nothing works lol. Thanks so much my friend for taking the time...hugs x
Hi MP,
That thereās a creator I have no doubt. Look around and see all things created. Though, I do believe the creatorās far beyond our comprehensionĀ
and has no interest in minutiae.
JP
Hi John...I agree with you entirely. I also believe its the very 'minutiae' that gives us our values...our building blocks for spiritual well being on this planet. By birds referenced above I am referring to all evil acts therefore you got to ask yourself...if 'god'(s) doesn't give a shit....is this 'god' (s) necessarily a 'good' god?Ā
That is what I do here...question because after all...'god'(s) gave us brains to do just this...and also the emotions that in the end kill most of us anyway, exactly because of all this 'minutiae' we are forced to witness and endure.
Hugs my friend and thankyou for taking the time to ponder with me x