Poem -
DEAD IRREVERENT
I never saw
The new green shoots
Though people
Gathered far
To say,
Also...
When I found
The
Silver clouds
To me
Their linings
Still
Looked grey,
And...
No angel
Ever
Passed
My way
Or stood
Upon your casket
There,
So...
Clearly...
Everybody said
The fault
Lay in
My very head,
That...
I only need
To welcome in
The
Joyous rebirth
That
Death brings,
I...
Only need
To stand and pray
Upon
The earth where
You
Do lay,
Where...
Shoots
Of green
Which can't
Be seen
Rebirth...
And,
Fuck that.
M P 23/1/22
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Oh I love this. This incredible
Ha..thanks Greg...many won't lol x
MARION!!.....this is a stunningly moving and powerfully motivated/inspired write.......The attachment felt & conveyed to the reader is profoundly moving in its elemental and spiritual implications.......I feel so very fortunate to have caught this tonight!!......ALL STARS!!....VERY well considered & beautifully delivered!!.......well done!........LOVE & ROCKETS .......T xo : ) Â
Tony thankyou so much for even taking the time...it is so greatly appreciated ...hugs x
Perfectly expressed my friend. There is a powerful message conveyed in this write. That place the grieving find themselves stuck in...yet so many people throwing candles to try and shed light in your darkness. They don’t realise your brightest light feels snuffed out. I got that sense in this piece. For what does it matter if things are reborn when they are no longer a part of you. Grief is cruel and torturous to the soul 💗 hugs xx
Hey Gwen, I'm trying to write about different subjects but end up writing about the same subject in different ways...what can I say? Thanks love đź’•
Wow brutal honestly so refreshing.Â
Love it.Â
Thankyou Liliana x