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Dead mind

Dead mind

The touch of your blade engraved on my skin
as we tango to the rhythm of my
genuine damned being-Ā 
twirling with the distraction of my desiresĀ which
I could never truly embraceĀ 
serenity and clarity grazing it’s fingers
all over my aching flesh
grief poured out in a flood painting
the gates of my graveĀ 

Dead mind - Ridwan
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Marion

Stunning write šŸ¤—

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The fish of the sea

Wow what a poem Ridwan! Fantastic work. I especially enjoyed the structure. How each line leads to the next. Makes for super engaging poetry. Welcome to the Comos! I hope you enjoy it here.

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Ridwan Muhiyadin

Thank you very much for the kind words I personally who is very shy about my work is really touched by the kind comment. And I’m enjoying myself on here and it gets me also to know about other great writers.Ā 

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Gwendoline

Love the poem, deep, dark and gritty. The sketch makes me think of Tim Burton, absolutely brilliant ink. Welcome to the Cosmo :)Ā 

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