Dead Right.

Eulogies are hard to fit right.
Pine polish and bullshit,Ā tingle the senses.
As wrong shaped words fight against the truth,
Bleeding lies, like troublesome menses.
Suited and booted stand next to black thralls.
All grumble prayers, rumble psalms.
Flaccid Rev shares slimy handshakes,
All have summer palms.
Johnny Cash strums.
As blue velvet curtains part,
For the coffin-coat to pass.
The men in the engine room pause lunch,
To crank-up the gas.
The suits and frocks duty is done.
Single-file they leave, dry-eyed
but relieved.
In eighty plus four years,
Nothing happened,
What had the dead man, ever achieved?

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Comments
The word that came to mind at the end .. was the walk.. he walked the walk and it was all that with no bullshit or fireworks.. I'm a terrible reviewer but I try .. sorry lol.. Ā I loved it either way..xo
Like some of my work, I leave plenty of room for interpretation..I'm pleased you've found yours. Thank you kindly for the feedbackĀ Tracey, muchĀ appreciated.
Hey LEE ROBBINS!!.... there was no way I cold not PIN this piece...... Masterful craftsmanship .......andĀ creative phrasing........ loved the Johnny Cash reference.......smokin'' grooves my friend!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?āā“ā³
Thanks TT... Good of you to take the time to read and give feedback..cheers. :)