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Deadly

What is more deadly?
A gun or a thought?

A gun gives you oppitunity.
A thought pulls the trigger.

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The fish of the sea

Wow Ryder, such a thought-provoking write. So very true, sometimes I feel that in this day and age, people forget how dangerous their words can be. I can resonate deeply with this...being bullied etc. Truth is, the best thing to do is just be yourself. I have read your other poems, and I think this really shines through. It's good to see another Australian Poet on here! I feel like we are few and far between. Welcome to the Cosmos!

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Depressed Child

I feel the same hey aussies rule ok and thanks I have been bullied as well and am still being bullied as I am still in primary school but thank you. You may not know it but peoples kind words are the thing keeping me alive.

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The fish of the sea

Ahhh thanks mate. I cant imagine what your going through, but as a random guy  from online, all I can be yourself. Don't let others tell you how to think or behave. Dont even let it take a cell of your brain to worry about how others think of you. I think if I had my time again, those words would've helped the most. I hope you can find them at least a tad useful. I have uni exams soon, but if I'm inactive I'll be back later this week. Look forward to reading your new writes. Cheers, Max

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