death calls

What a nice set of rhymes!
I liked that part:

the dog wagged it's old tail

I guess the dog is smarter than its tail., otherwise the tail will wag the dog : ))))

I like Your writing!

Coco

Greetings Meenakshi,

Promised myself a good nights sleep and if i don't watch out the day will have slipped up on me but your poem is one that answers practically all things related to our lives,that we hold to as important and the introduction to death ,(as we know it and as we expect it to be), as it awaits our cross over to he, the ruler of the afterlife, (death). A reservation that will be fulfilled but hopes and dreams of a better life to exist after. We will hope to have dawned  and hastily passed through his door, to our awaiting destination. To this world i have no desire  for a life of replenishment, my only regrets are of those lost and just as i, soon to be, no longer part of this present but now, (a thing of the past). A recorded memory in time, awaiting now my new beginning and new lease on a life waiting to be adorned, as though a crown of valor...A pretty seed you have sowed into a poem  of sheer enjoyment, by its readers, you now  have  placed yourself in the position, to have to plant another seed, in the garden of this site, in order to please and quiet the crowd you have gathered in wake of your works... Good job..

Take Care,

Jim    

You are very much welcome and the gesture to read  and comment,was one that was truly generous by you, many more need to follow your lead as well.You are one who believes not, to take from the pot, without returning to it...Extremely thoughtful..Wish all on this site was that way in deed...........

Kind regards,

Jim