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Ravindra Kumar

Thoughtful philosophy,..select the path of happy living...avoid intrusion,...lovable.

Ravindra Kumar

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you ravindra Kumar xx love to you sweetheart xx Nardine Sanderson xx

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Jimmy Arnold

Nardine,

 A well representation of death being forced to take a holiday, by his foes, whether he would like to are not. A head forced under water scenario beyond any limit but with the ability to once again, still breath fine....Nice...

Cheers,

Jim

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Nardine Sanderson

Jimmy i like your view on this write very well perceived , i was thinking about how often accidents claims rights to death, but emergency officials revival denies thy soul to leave ( denied death upon resuscitation), both work well for me, thank you for your point upon viewing, i deeply appreciate it, much love nardine xx

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Jimmy Arnold

Hey Nardine,

Again your subject writing, transcends earths physical proto-cols, on how things are expected to be perceived and replaces it, with all the possibilities, of (what ifs), thus, allowing once closed doors, to the body, mind, and soul, be now opened to the realization, that just because it was said or believed to be, it must be. As such in this piece, being revived back from the dead, (which was once thought to be final), without any means of return, which as we see and now well known, is a myth rather than fact.....Wonderful piece and I could go on and on, regarding this matter but will end here and not talk your ear off. Once again, I will convey to you (job wonderfully well done).  A power packed little Free style/ Haiku poem.

Take Care,

Jim

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Nardine Sanderson

Thank you sweetheart, much love to you jimmy , much appreciation xx Nardine xx

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