Poem -
Deep thinking inner thoughts
Matthews challenge
Deepthinking oneās inner thoughts..over tasking the brain ..locked inside our mindās eye is an ever blind strain.. Nobody but yourself knowās what churns in oneās head.. caught up in confusion amidst the comfort of your bed
Like the pendlum on a clock dropping down to the floor..spiralling
situations tilā one canāt take anymore..help may be at hand tho not tilā the morning light..lying wide awake agonising betwixt the darkness of the night..one miniscule thought in those wee small hours magnifies to a torrential flood from just April showers..pitter patter pitter dripping in drops.. your deep thinking will never cease until anxiety stops
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Comments
Aww Thanks luv but Its2 am n I forgot was meant to b a funny challenge ?ā¤ļøā£ļø?
Wow Jill!!! An extremely witty, very well thought out piece of intelligent perception here that renders the reader swimming in deep thoughts of their own...well done!!!! ????
Aww Thanks Hunnybun but lol that was meant to be Matthewās humerous deep thinking challengr pml I read his request at 2 a m so was abit weary lmao but done another lol xxx
oh Jill thats brilliant!! you little writing machine!!
them deep thoughts....driving us crazy and need release in poetic form!!
Always Fab. Px
Awww lol Thanks loads me little Hunnybun ā¤ļø?ā¤ļø
Hi Jillian!Ā
Wow, when you want to write on a subject, you do it so beautifully! That was gorgeous!Ā
The Deep Thoughts was meant to be humorous, but I probably didn't explain it that well, and you probably read so fast that you don't see words, LOL, but that was great! and is definitely a top contender, or a winner!! Well, I keep telling everyone that, because they're all great! and I love all you guys, but it's going to be hard to judge!Ā
Hey, didn't you have another one that you posted before I actually wrote the contest rules??!! lol. Speedy Jillzales! I will look for it.Ā
You're awesome, my friend!Ā
Hugs,Ā
Matthew.Ā
It is 2 up above thisun called āAāstinkinā Sheepā lol
Haha I wrote another for you after it humerous xxx