Poem -
Differences
you said you'd never go
but you leftĀ
you said you needed meĀ
but you didn'tĀ
you said you loved meĀ
but you lied
i said I'd never go
i still haven'tĀ
i said i needed you
i do
i said i loved youĀ
i'll never stopĀ
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Comments
Simple but effective !! A structure to really drive home the emotion of a relationship !
Wishing you all the best ! Ā :)
Take care.
Thank you, when I wrote this one I was writing on pure thoughts. This is one of my poems that just comes out and says exactly what it means.
With love,
Grac
It is such a competent work. Your thoughts were clear and the result is a poem which is likewise.
Great read.
Wishing you the very best ! Ā :)